the blade ran swiftly through my wrists
a red thread blossomed into a stream
as it flowed, the cross washed away
with eyes closed, i drift with a smile
a red thread blossomed into a stream
as it flowed, the cross washed away
with eyes closed, i drift with a smile
5 comments:
the first line already gave it away. boo. btw, is it "drifted..with a smile" ?
i was wondering if anyone would be negatively affected by my meaning... from your comment, i guess not...
anyway, it's "drift" coz it's the present, not the past... the act is in the past, but dying is not...
but then, that's just bad english, isn't it? the first three line gave an allusion that it's of a sequence of event...surely with the last line, the drifting is as current as the blade cutting and the blood flowing.
:P
nic, ya ok? :P
u always comes up wif some unexpected...crazy...
-jia-
Great work.
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